When a major tech company announced its “workforce optimization initiative” last year, employees had to wade through three paragraphs of corporate language before understanding the simple truth: Layoffs were coming.

This kind of obscure writing, which writer George Orwell critiqued in his landmark 1946 essay, “Politics and the English Language” leads to costly misunderstandings, missed opportunities, and lost productivity in businesses. Perhaps more importantly, using euphemisms, corporate-speak, and vague language can lead both employees and customers to distrust your words.

Orwell, known for novels such as “1984” and “Animal Farm,” analyzed in his essay how language was being used to hide uncomfortable realities from the public. His insights resonate powerfully today when political language still obscures truth. For example, “alternative facts” replace “lies,” and “election integrity measures” can mask voting restrictions. In business, where ”workforce optimization” softens the impact of layoffs and “revenue enhancement” replaces “price increase.” When language becomes corrupted, Orwell argued, clear thinking becomes impossible, a warning that matters especially in business communication. From earnings reports to internal memos, corporate communication often prioritizes style over substance, and vagueness over clarity.

If you have read a corporate report recently, you probably know what kind of writing Orwell was describing. The same problems he identified in political writing plague business communication: overused metaphors, pretentious language, excessive jargon, and writing that conceals rather than reveals meaning.

Dying Metaphors

Metaphors compare one thing to another to make a point. A fresh metaphor works because it creates a vivid mental picture that illuminates meaning. But when a metaphor is used thousands of times, it loses this power and becomes mere jargon. “Low-hanging fruit” has become a tired shorthand for quick wins. “Moving the needle” rarely makes anyone visualize an actual gauge anymore. Other deadened business metaphors include “raise the bar,” and “hit the ground running.” All signal lazy writing.

Pretentious Diction

Too many business writers labor under the false impression that using lots of long words makes them seem smarter and more professional. The opposite is true. Using “facilitate a discussion” instead of “lead a meeting,” “has the capability to” instead of ”can,” or “prior to the commencement of” instead of “before” makes your writing seem hard to read. Peppering your emails with unnecessarily complex phrases makes your readers skip over your message or dismiss it as too demanding to read. Writing clearly and succinctly gives others the sense that you are capable and bright.

Meaningless Words

Anyone who has worked in a corporation sees meaningless words every day. “Proceed with the implementation” replaces “begin”; “notwithstanding the foregoing” replaces “however.” “Downsizing” replaces “layoffs.” These obfuscations slow readers down and confuse them through their vagueness.

These habits are so common that one wonders how people feel they benefit from using them. Perhaps they fear that others will be upset by their message — but readers will be more upset when they have to wade through vague verbiage to figure out what you mean. It’s helpful to turn to Orwell for wisdom. “What is above all needed,” he writes, “is to let the meaning choose the word, and not the other way about.”

His six rules for writers were:

1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech that you are used to seeing in print. In other words, avoid clichéd expressions like “think outside the box.”
2. Never use a long word when a short one will do. “Use” works better than “utilize.”
3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. Instead of “at this point in time” write “now.”
4. Never use the passive voice where you can use the active. Write: “The team missed the deadline” rather than “The deadline was missed by the team.”
5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. Replace “vis-a-vis” with “regarding,” “raison d’être” with “purpose,” or “quantum leap” with “big change.”
6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

Orwell warned that murky political language was designed to hide the truth. The same applies to business writing. When we strip away the fog of jargon and pretense and say what we mean, our words gain an air of authenticity and vigor —and our messages are clear.

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Even the most compelling email content is worthless if it’s never opened. Mastering the art of the subject line is crucial for ensuring your messages don’t end up in the dreaded Trash folder before they are read.

When deciding whether to open emails, readers look first at the sender. We all have people whose emails we will open no matter what is in their subject line. But the subject line determines whether the vast majority of emails will be opened or ignored. To get decision-makers, clients, and colleagues to actually read your messages, here are five tips for writing gripping subject lines.

1. Use meaningful keywords for search and filtering.

Be cautious about using generic phrases like “following up,” which is too vague for most business communications. Ask yourself: Following up on what? What about it?

Most professionals file or archive their emails. When they want to examine the history of a matter or transaction, they start by searching subject lines for relevant keywords. If the subject lines rely on stale terms such as “Meeting follow-up” or “Touching base,” the searcher is lost.

Business writers should include enough relevant keywords in the subject line to distinguish the email from the hundreds of other emails the reader receives.

2. Keep the subject line pithy.

Your subject line should be 45 characters or fewer (six to eight words): long enough to hook your reader’s attention, but short enough that it does not get cut off on mobile devices. Doing this fulfills two functions:

First, it makes the subject line readable on a mobile device. Think about the tiny space allotted to subject lines on your phone. Are you likely to scroll down to read all of a long subject line? Didn’t think so.

Second, it hooks your readers’ attention. Your business contacts need the subject line to tell them instantly whether the message matters to them. For example, I received an email from a financial institution today that fit the bill. It said, “Act now to avoid a fee.” I opened it right away.

3. If you have a request, say so.

Do you always read to the end of every email? Of course not. Your clients and colleagues don’t always read to the end either. If your email contains a request for action or a response, place the request in the first two lines of the email or your reader might never see it.

For example, a hotel client’s general manager once wrote to all property managers asking them to submit a certain report. The request appeared at the end of a long, convoluted email. Not surprisingly, none of the managers turned in the report: They hadn’t read far enough into the missive to see what their boss wanted them to do.

Give the reader a heads-up that the message contains a request by mentioning it at the beginning. They will pay closer attention to the message, making you more likely to get your desired response. For example: “Q4 Report: Signoff Required by Friday” is more likely to get a response than “Q4 Report.”

4. State your deadline.

In my Worktalk writing training, I advise participants never to write “as soon as possible.” Using this phrase gives power to the reader. Maybe as soon as possible for him is next February. When you write “as soon as possible,” you usually have a time in mind. Tell the reader your deadline, and they will likely focus more on responding to you. Even if you do not have a fixed deadline, you can add urgency to your message by including a deadline.

5. Proofread carefully.

The subject line is the first thing your business contacts see — don’t mess it up. Spell-check does not work in subject lines, which makes it all the more crucial to check it slowly and carefully yourself. If you stay up until 2:00 a.m. working on an important document and then send the client an email with the subject line, “Please sing the atached document,” the client will doubt the accuracy of all your work. Stop, take a breath, and read every subject line slowly. In the business world, you do not have room for error.

Unless the reader opens your email, your message is lost. These principles will help you win the war against unopened emails.

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When social media influencer Lisa Beasley parodies corporate speak with her “Corporate Erin” persona on TikTok, thousands laugh along. Her satirical videos mock the buzzwords that tangle modern business communication. But behind the humor lies a serious issue: corporate jargon is creating real barriers in today’s multigenerational workplace.

According to the Duolingo and LinkedIn State of Workplace Jargon Report, which surveyed more than 8,000 workers across eight countries, the overuse of business buzzwords isn’t just annoying, it’s actively hampering understanding and productivity across generational lines. Nearly 60 percent of respondents felt that their colleagues overused jargon. Gen Z-ers and Millennials sometimes feel excluded when they don’t understand the terms their managers use. Buzzwords baffle Baby Boomers, too, as they hear their younger counterparts use language in unexpected ways.

The generational divide in understanding corporate jargon is evident in the examples that confuse different age groups. The Duolingo/LinkedIn study highlighted specific terms that cause the most confusion in American workplaces. Phrases like “boiling the ocean” and “herding cats” topped the list of perplexing jargon. Even seemingly ubiquitous expressions such as “run it up the flagpole,” “move the needle,” or “get your ducks in a row” can leave many employees scratching their heads.

When managers tell their young workers to “run an idea up a flagpole,” Gen Z employees may wonder which flagpole the manager is talking about. Referring to “balls in the air” conjures images of circus jugglers and a term like “blue sky thinking” might mystify younger staff.

Conversely, many Boomers’ minds boggle when they learn that “brat” is now a positive term and “savage” implies being brave or fearless. The evolving nature of language means that “high-key” now means the opposite of “low-key,” implying giving all one’s energy to a task, while “bae” stands for “before anyone else.” The message here is obvious: Business buzzwords blur rather than boost business communication.

When you use too many business buzzwords, you might make members of certain age groups feel excluded. Worse, they might not know what you’re talking about. If the purpose of communication is to convey our meaning seamlessly to our readers, corporate buzzwords are clearly not doing the job.

Using terms that other people do not understand makes them feel disconnected from you. When people feel alienated, they are less open to receiving your message. Why write in a way that obstructs the communication goals you are trying to achieve?

The solution to this communication conundrum isn’t complex, but it does require conscious effort.

Here are some strategies to improve workplace communication:

When you encounter a term you don’t understand, don’t hesitate to ask for clarification. This not only helps you but also alerts others to potentially confusing language. Remember, if you’re confused, others likely are too.

Consider who you’re communicating with and adjust your language accordingly. What’s clear to you might be opaque to others.

If you must use industry-specific jargon, provide brief explanations to ensure everyone is on the same page. For instance, “blue sky” and “boiling the ocean” sound like meteorological terms to me, just as “low-hanging fruit” could be mistaken for good news for farm workers.

Use clear, straightforward language in your own communication. Regardless of your position in the organization, you can become the person known for straight talk.

Instead of relying on tired buzzwords, challenge yourself to find fresh, clear ways to express your ideas. Write clearly and simply. Your readers will feel refreshed, included, and genuinely ready to engage with your message.

Remember, the goal of business communication isn’t to spout the latest slang–it’s to convey ideas effectively and drive collective success. By actively working to eliminate generation-specific words and prioritizing clear communication, you create more inclusive, efficient, and productive workplaces.

The next time you’re tempted to use a buzzword, pause and ask yourself: Is there a simpler way to express this idea? Your colleagues–across all generations–will thank you for it.

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