“Make every word tell.”Strunk and White, The Elements of Style In preparing for a recent writing training, I received 60 pages of sample documents. I found myself writing, “omit needless words” at least once on every page, as writers wrote sentences like “The company frequently from time to time receives discounts on its products.” and […]
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Which is more engaging?She said… or She shrieked, she whispered, she yelled, she lisped, she bellowedHe walked… or He hobbled, he strode, he strutted, he limped, he prancedThey did… or They eviscerated, they surpassed, they glorified, they overcame, they exulted Verbs enliven language. They are your single greatest weapon against dullness. By adding this one
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Responding to a ComplaintHere is an email received by a short-term apartment rental agency:It is pretty amazing how inept your agency is. You promised me that the apartment would be clean before Mr. A came back. They came into an apartment that was not clean and called me to complain. They ordered a cleaner to
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Dear John!We are really excited to be taking this next step with your company!! I know that we are going to be experiencing incredible growth together! Please contact me if there is anything that you need from us!Looking forward to a great future together!Robert Quick: What is your opinion of Robert? Is he a cool-headed
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How to Stop Forcing Your Writing Have you ever agonized over how to write something? Tried one word after another, not sure which was right? Stumbled through a sentence, painstakingly trying to piece together what you wanted to say? Most of us have had this painful experience. Some of us experience it all the time.
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